Nepal Public Figures Challenge Human Rights Watch
On October 16, 2015, Human Rights Watch (HRW) published its report on human rights violations in August and September:
“Like We Are Not Nepali”: Protest and Police Crackdown in the Terai Region of Nepal
During protests leading up to the adoption of a new constitution, 9 police and 36 civilians were tragically killed. Most shocking are stories of brutality against children. The following is disturbing, but less graphic than others in the report:
Fourteen-year-old Nitu Yadav was among the protesters. He attempted to hide from the police in some bushes. Four separate eyewitnesses described what happened next. In front of onlookers he was dragged from his hiding place by police officers, thrown to the ground, and, while a officer stood on his legs, shot him dead in the face at point-blank range. Doctors who subsequently examined Yadav’s body confirmed that it bore injuries consistent with this account.
No police officers have been publicly charged for these crimes.
Faced with stories of unbelievable cruelty from both sides in the Terai, how do Nepal public figures respond? What follows is a look at challenges to Human Rights Watch, issued by four journalists and one human rights activist.
What About the Blockade
An early challenge for Human Rights Watch was not a criticism per se, but a question:
.@hrw rightly calls out human-rights violations by the police during Madhesh protests.But will they spare a word to condemn the blockade?
— Rubeena Mahato (@rubeenaa) October 16, 2015
Columnist and former journalist Rubeena Mahato (11,300 Twitter followers) affirmed HRW’s report. At the same time, she questioned whether Human Rights Watch would “spare a word to condemn” the blockade.
This query was later addressed by Tejshree Thapa, a Human Rights Watch researcher and editor of the report:
@SulavKarki @ghimireprashant we deal with rights violations, not politics. Blockade political issue.
— Tejshree Thapa (@TejshreeThapa) October 31, 2015
As a policy, Human Rights Watch avoids detailing issues it considers political. But in fact, the HRW report did mention the blockade:
Protests along the Terai escalated throughout September, with protesters blockading border crossing routes from India to Nepal in a concerted attempt to halt the flow of petrol, gas, and other goods into Nepal. Over the course of the month, as a direct result of these protests, the country was hit by a severe petrol and gas shortage.
Perhaps this is not condemning the blockade strongly enough for some. Nevertheless, HRW called the blockade situation “severe” and did not ignore it.
We must remember that August 24 to September 11, 2015 is the specific focus of HRW’s field investigation. During this time, the blockade was not as severe as it became after September 20, when Nepal’s constitution was promulgated.
Which Violence is Worse
Rubeena Mahato also made a crucial point about comparing two types of violence in the report. Which is more serious: a murder committed by a police officer on duty, or one by a civilian? Mahato summed it up this way:
arbitrary state violence is worse than protest violence
The state entrusts police with the power and responsibility to protect civilians. Thus, abuse of state power is more disturbing than the actions of a common criminal. By the same token, journalists should be more vocal about human rights violations committed by police than by civilians, all other things being equal. Most of all, police must set the example for justice and harm-reduction, especially when attacked.
Invitation to Critics
Tejshree Thapa of Human Rights Watch recently made this appeal to critics:
#Nepal civil society critical of @hrw report: would appreciate being tagged when you lash out, only fair to give us chance to respond 1.2
— Tejshree Thapa (@TejshreeThapa) October 31, 2015
#Nepal civil society critical of @hrw report: you know me, ask me Q's directly rather than starting huge twitter feud behind my back 2/2
— Tejshree Thapa (@TejshreeThapa) October 31, 2015
Accusation of Bias
Here is one of the first accusations, which came the same day Human Rights Watch released its report:
One of the most biased human rights reports I've ever read. @hrw !! #facts #language
— Subhash Ghimire (@subhash580) October 16, 2015
Subhash Ghimire (5,000 Twitter followers) is Editor in Chief of Republica, “The Most Comprehensive No. 1 News Portal of Nepal”. Though lacking details on “#facts”, his claim of bias was swiftly echoed by some of his readers. Judgements of the 50-page report started arriving literally two minutes after Ghimire’s:
Update: @jjmahat820 deleted his tweet after this article was published, but it was saved on Archive.org. In Nepal time, the tweet was sent at 9:13 PM – 16 Oct 2015.
@subhash580 @hrw its not a report its a sensational fictional story copying whoever says anything without verification
— tuinebuda (@gurutashishenga) October 16, 2015
@subhash580 @jhyal @hrw With its latest report on Nepal, HRW has become: Hearsay Reported Well.
— Prateet Acharya (@1Prateet) October 16, 2015
At the same time, other readers challenged Ghimire to justify his accusation of bias:
@rabithapa @subhash580 @hrw I would like to know which had been most biased in your opinion.
— Pramod Bhagat (@pramodbhagat) October 18, 2015
@manishjhanepal @subhash580 @hrw even I would like to know
— Rupesh (@RupeshThinks) October 19, 2015
@subhash580 @hrw Yes, Mr. Editor, specifics. Otherwise, will be charged with "nebulousness" again. Writing sometimes ok. Mind shouldn't be.
— Pramod Mishra (@khardobad) October 18, 2015
@subhash580 If you are going to say something that accusatory, at least point it out. Or is it been done somewhere? @hrw
— Niraj Pandey (@nir_pan) October 31, 2015
Despite these repeated requests, Ghimire did not respond in this public forum to present any evidence of bias. Nor did he provide a link to encourage followers to read the HRW report and evaluate for themselves. Although Twitter is a young medium where journalistic best practices are sometimes ambiguous, it is clear that an Editor in Chief can do better.
An accusation of extreme bias is not something to lob into public without evidence. “#Facts” should point to facts.
Hiding the Truth
An even higher-profile criticism came from a fellow human rights activist based in Nepal:
https://twitter.com/subodhfreenep/status/659350792248274945
Subodh Pyakurel (32,000 Twitter followers) is a widely-recognized public figure in Nepal. His organization has been investigating human rights for decades:
@subodhfreenep Is your organization conducting its own field investigation into brutality in #Madhes? #Nepal
— Robert Penner (@robpenner) November 2, 2015
https://twitter.com/subodhfreenep/status/661094133562368000
Surprised at his accusation against Human Rights Watch, I first confirmed which police lynching Mr. Pyakurel was referring to:
@subodhfreenep Do you mean the killing of Assistant Sub-Inspector Thaman Bishwokarma on Sept. 11? https://t.co/a9ARLPwvyW
— Robert Penner (@robpenner) October 29, 2015
https://twitter.com/subodhfreenep/status/659783384248397824
Pyakurel’s accusation, re-tweeted 19 times at present, was two-fold:
- Human Rights Watch did not report the lynching of policeman Thaman Bishwokarma from an ambulance.
- HRW wrongly reports that Nepal’s constitution creates second-class citizens.
He expanded on the first claim in a spirited exchange with his readers:
https://twitter.com/subodhfreenep/status/659787253745516544
@subodhfreenep u tweeted without reading the report. Better read the report before tweeting.
— Raghbendra Patel (@PatelRaghbendra) October 29, 2015
https://twitter.com/subodhfreenep/status/659789294614089728
@subodhfreenep It clearly says that in the report, read before you share. And oh my oh my, and see the re tweeters! @mukesh2006 @diwakerZha
— Avinash Mishra (@thekotp) October 29, 2015
https://twitter.com/subodhfreenep/status/659789880264818689
To summarize, Pyakurel put forward five specific allegations regarding Bishwokarma’s lynching:
- HRW “didn’t report lynching”.
- HRW falsely reported there was no concussion.
- HRW did not consider an attendant’s interview saved by villagers.
- HRW “cleverly manipulated” the report to be biased.
- HRW “intentionally hides” a crime against humanity, i.e. dragging a patient from an ambulance and killing him.
Regarding claim 2, HRW reported:
Following this attack, Bishwokarma was brought to hospital. Despite two severe cuts in his scalp, consistent with a lathi beating, the hospital found no sign of a concussion…
From the context, Pyakurel seems to connect claims 2 and 3, though it is not entirely clear. That is to say, a concussion was reported in an attendant’s interview, apparently. Pyakurel did not provide a source for the interview, so his claim cannot be evaluated. HRW interviewed numerous eye witnesses in its field investigation and claims to report the hospital’s account. But really, what is the potential scandal here: “concussion cover-up”? How would a concussion affect the outcome of Bishwokarma’s tragic death?
Footnotegate
The most serious charge of Subodh Pyakurel against Human Rights Watch is that it “intentionally hides” a “crime against humanity”, because it “didn’t report” the lynching of Bishwokarma.
However, opening the report, this incident appears in the table of contents:
The account on page 33 runs 400 words. Several readers sent screenshots to Pyakurel:
@subodhfreenep I don't know what do you want. the blame game needs to end! violence is bad! pic.twitter.com/3fzyxYP9z0
— Avinash Mishra (@thekotp) October 30, 2015
At this point, I was at a loss to understand Pyakurel’s objection. After several rounds of comparing his comments to the report, I noticed that the words “dragged” and “killed” appear in a footnote but not in the rest of the account:
In case the footnote was overlooked, I called it to Mr. Pyakurel’s attention:
@subodhfreenep See footnote 62: "injured APF ASI dragged out of ambulance & Killed", "Protesters seize amb., kill injured APF official."
— Robert Penner (@robpenner) October 29, 2015
But he rejected the footnote’s sufficiency:
https://twitter.com/subodhfreenep/status/659790443882807296
The implication is that placing information in a footnote is tantamount to “ignoring”, even though the footnote links to two newspaper articles describing the dragging and killing.
I responded to his questioning of HRW’s motivation for using the footnote:
@subodhfreenep Don't forget that @hrw spent 3000 words on Kailali lynching of 8 police officers. Does that count for something? #Madhes
— Robert Penner (@robpenner) October 29, 2015
I countered Pyakurel’s theory that Human Rights Watch attempted to cover-up for leaders of violence:
@subodhfreenep Then what's your theory of why @hrw detailed only 16 of 36 civilian deaths? To downplay crimes of police? #Madhes
— Robert Penner (@robpenner) October 29, 2015
To be clear, I do not fault HRW for detailing 16 of 36 civilian deaths, versus all 9 of the police deaths. HRW’s field investigation with eyewitnesses had a defined scope and timeframe.
The point is this: if a footnote is evidence of bias against police, it follows that omitting 20 of 36 civilian victims indicates bias against civilians. With two supposed biases running in opposite directions, which one is stronger?
I tried to understand how the depiction could possibly suggest that Bishwokarma died of something other than protester attacks:
@subodhfreenep Do you think anyone will read p 33 of @hrw report & not get the implication Bishwokarma died because of the attacks?
— Robert Penner (@robpenner) October 29, 2015
Pyakurel’s response did not address the question, but was intriguing nonetheless:
@subodhfreenep I welcome that. I can read and speak Nepali.
— Robert Penner (@robpenner) October 29, 2015
As of yet, Pyakurel has not contacted me further about sending these audio-visual materials.
What does Human Rights Watch have to say in its defense? Tejshree Thapa of HRW responded to the footnote controversy:
@robpenner @subodhfreenep Simple answer is that crime occurred after we had stopped our field research. We're not in business of covering up
— Tejshree Thapa (@TejshreeThapa) October 31, 2015
Despite this explanation from Human Rights Watch, Subodh Pyakurel has not retracted his charge of hiding a crime against humanity. Nor has he posted HRW’s response for his 32,000 Twitter followers on his own timeline. (If Pyakurel posts a retraction, it will be noted in an update to this article.)
Second-Class Quotes
The preceding lengthy discussion covered only the first of Subodh Pyakurel’s two main accusations. His other claim was that Human Rights Watch reported a falsehood about Nepal’s new constitution:
https://twitter.com/subodhfreenep/status/659350792248274945
I searched the HRW report and found four mentions of “second-class citizen”. I asked Pyakurel to explain why this phrase was always in quotes:
@subodhfreenep The @hrw #Madhes report mentions "second-class citizen" 4 times. Each time it is in quotes. Do you know why that is?
— Robert Penner (@robpenner) October 29, 2015
https://twitter.com/subodhfreenep/status/659794677458034688
However, there is a more straightforward reason for the quotes:
@subodhfreenep The allegation of "second-class citizen" is reported in quotes from Madhesis. It's not @hrw making the allegation.
— Robert Penner (@robpenner) October 29, 2015
As with footnotes, quotation marks serve a valuable purpose. We can easily understand that when a journalist interviews and quotes people, their claims belong to them and not to the journalist. The journalist is not required to prove each allegation that is quoted as if it were his or her own. Similarly, Human Rights Watch reported that some Terai groups believe Nepal’s new constitution creates “second-class citizens”. Its report was not a constitutional analysis. It merely mentioned the “second-class citizen” allegation a handful of times as context for Madhesi discontent.
Here are the four uses of “second-class citizens” in the HRW report. Notice that each one either contains the word “claim”, or is told from a local’s perspective:
They objected to the new federal boundaries and to other aspects of the new constitution which they claim abrogate previous commitments made to their communities and create “second-class” citizens.
They also claim that under the new charter they will be underrepresented in the national legislature, that many members of their communities will be given “second-class” citizenship status…
We are being treated inhumanely, like second-class citizens.
We are being treated inhumanely, like second-class citizens.
[repeated elsewhere]
Mr. Pyakurel did not respond further on the “second-class citizen” issue. Nor did he correct this misunderstanding for the benefit of his readers.
(Though the HRW report does not analyze Nepal’s new constitution, I delve into the “second-class citizen” controversy in my article: Second-Class: The Nepal Embassy and Citizenship Inaccuracies)
Downplaying Atrocities
Subodh Pyakurel’s comment triggered another public figure’s accusation of HRW bias toward protesters:
@subodhfreenep It exposes state atrocities well.Good! But it omits/downplays atrocities by protesters &India. Any idea who wrote the report?
— Post Bahadur Basnet (@LevBasnet) October 28, 2015
Post Bahadur Basnet (2,300 Twitter followers) is a journalist who writes for Associated Press and various other news outlets around the world.
Responding to his concern about downplaying, I sent him the HRW report and called his attention to the killings of eight police in Kailali, spanning pages 13 through 23:
@robpenner Okay, how the policemen were killed? Where are the details? @subodhfreenep @hrw
— Post Bahadur Basnet (@LevBasnet) October 29, 2015
While responding to a comment containing the link to the HRW report, Basnet asked “Where are the details?”
@robpenner Chased? Did they pray for life? What did the 'informers" say? @subodhfreenep @hrw
— Post Bahadur Basnet (@LevBasnet) October 29, 2015
I provided quotes to Basnet:
@robpenner Para after para depicting grisly murder of protesters. And then give a para to protesters's action? Fair. @subodhfreenep
— Post Bahadur Basnet (@LevBasnet) October 29, 2015
Basnet remained under the impression that relatively little coverage (akin to “a para[graph]”) was given to protester actions, even though the 3,000-word section on the police lynchings had already been mentioned.
Additional quotes of protester brutality against police from the report were brushed aside:
@robpenner It doesn't depict the brutality the way it depicted police brutality. It supports certain narrartive. Period. @subodhfreenep
— Post Bahadur Basnet (@LevBasnet) October 29, 2015
@robpenner I know how such reports are written. Style and interests. Possibly even who were consultants. No need to debate. Thanks!
— Post Bahadur Basnet (@LevBasnet) October 29, 2015
“No need to debate. Thanks!”
Thus ended this exchange.
Footnotegate II
Shiwani Neupane (6,700 Twitter followers) is a journalist who comments prolifically on justice and human rights. She strongly condemns violence on all sides:
No to blockade.
No to blackmail.
No to violent-protest.
No to police-brutality.
No to Indian-interference.
Yes to legitimate demands.— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) October 26, 2015
Police brutality helps none and it should be condemned STRONGLY but so should violent protests, use of petrol bombs and handmade weapons.
— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) November 3, 2015
Her reaction to the HRW report the day of its release was affirming, with some qualifications:
This HRW piece is good except most major journalists/ publications did speak out against police brutality https://t.co/2LxZ4Gwa8R #Nepal
— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) October 16, 2015
@adil_alig07 No it's a very good report – fair on police brutality- but has few inconsistencies. @hrw
— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) October 16, 2015
However, Neupane later accused Human Rights Watch of not properly covering the death of a policeman:
.@hrw was the lynching of a policeman who was dragged out of an ambulance by a mob and killed worth a footnote only in your #Nepal report?
— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) October 29, 2015
— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) October 29, 2015
According to Neupane, HRW used “a footnote only” to document the lynching of a policeman in an ambulance. A proper report of his death was not “worth” enough to Human Rights Watch, in her estimation.
Apparently unaware that the footnote controversy had already been debunked, Neupane was informed by her readers:
@suvsh @ShiwaniNeupane @hrw is this a "footnote" 4 u? Plz stop spreading lies.. pic.twitter.com/CIUwcEwbIW
— A.S jha (azzu) (@ajjujha) October 30, 2015
[Update: Credit to Suvash Sedhain for acknowledging the correction immediately.]
@robpenner Thanks!! thats more than a footnote!! @DandiBiyo @ShiwaniNeupane @hrw
— Suvash Sedhain (@suvsh) October 29, 2015
Interestingly, Neupane did not recognize the HRW report from the screenshot provided:
@ajjujha send me a link of this? I am pretty sure this wasn't on the main report I read. @suvsh @hrw
— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) October 30, 2015
I asked Neupane to clarify which “main report” she read, but she did not respond.
Then Neupane claimed that “most people” had read a different document.
@ajjujha it is not in the main summary that most people read. @suvsh @hrw
— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) October 30, 2015
Given that a summary would have omitted the footnote, the relevance of this point is not obvious.
Neupane was asked whether she had read the footnote and its context before criticizing it, but she would not say:
@ajjujha if anything that important is in a footnote, I will call it a footnote. That simple. @suvsh @hrw
— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) October 30, 2015
@ajjujha you all can try and manipulate facts as much as you want, but it was on a footnote. That simple. @suvsh @hrw
— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) October 30, 2015
Neupane was adamant that her comment was accurate. However, her original complaint of “a footnote only” does not do justice to HRW’s 400-word account of Bishwokarma’s death.
The discussion ended there with no retraction. But a few days later, a hopeful sign emerged, albeit in a different context:
All of us make mistakes in reporting sometimes. Right thing to do is apologize and issue a correction. #Nepal
— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) November 2, 2015
[Update: Neupane clarified she is not apologizing for her accusation against HRW.]
@binubirag it wasn't wrong. The information was hidden in a footnote. Not the main report. @anilbhattarai
— Shiwani Neupane (@ShiwaniNeupane) November 3, 2015
From the Press Council of Nepal’s Code of Conduct:
(9) Readiness to rectify errors: Upon receiving information of any error or mistake in a publication or broadcast, to rectify such error or mistake as soon as possible, and give proper place to any refutation or response that comes accompanied by evidence, publishing-broadcasting the same in clear language.
Final Thoughts
Journalists and human rights activists are the eyes and ears of society. They have a specialized vocation to hold the powerful accountable, defend the vulnerable and educate the public. Each of the public figures mentioned here has done this for years. The difficulty and weight of their work is something a non-journalist and engineer such as myself can never fully understand. This critique is not a general statement on their work or character. It is not a personal attack; rather, it is quoting and questioning their public statements, just as they do to politicians. This critique’s scope is limited to specific discussions on the HRW report within a short period. I did not enter these discussions intending to write an article. But what I experienced first-hand compelled me to document the patterns that emerged. Ultimately, I hope that debunking this misinformation about the Human Rights Watch report will generate more discussion about the real issues. And ultimately, I hope that Nepali society will pressure the Nepal government to enact justice for all the victims, and change police attitudes and tactics to prevent these abuses of power from reoccurring.
The Human Rights Watch Report
Human Rights Watch describes itself this way:
Human Rights Watch is a nonprofit, nongovernmental human rights organization made up of roughly 400 staff members around the globe. Its staff consists of human rights professionals including country experts, lawyers, journalists, and academics of diverse backgrounds and nationalities. Established in 1978, Human Rights Watch is known for its accurate fact-finding, impartial reporting, effective use of media, and targeted advocacy, often in partnership with local human rights groups. Each year, Human Rights Watch publishes more than 100 reports and briefings on human rights conditions in some 90 countries.